31st Jan 2019 #TellTaleThursday

Destiny
January 30, 2019
The Red Flower
February 6, 2019

Rules are simple-

  • Write a story, complete in itself.
  • Check spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
  • Copy and paste your Story URL to the inLinkz list.
  • The story should be up to 250 words.
  • Add this line < #TellTaleThursday with Anshu & Priya > at the end of the post.
  • Read, comment and share – spread the love.

Write a story with the picture given below. Have fun! Write bold, write unusual!

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The Treasure

 
 
 

Saanvi had seen that oak tree before. She picked the shovel next to the tree and started digging. Minutes later, she was digging with such ferocity as her life depended on it.

She unearthed an old trunk and found her lost treasure. Inside the trunk, pictures of her childhood were stashed, testifying that her blurred memories were real. He was not a figment of her imagination, as she was made to believe.

She picked the picture in which he held her hand. The moment was etched in her memory, which she was made to believe was a dream. The colors of the pictures were smudged but her memories were deep.

The face which was hazy in her memory came to life. Under the oak tree, she resurrected the old memories. She knew she had to find that face too.

12 Comments

  1. Akshata Ram says:

    Leaves me with a feeling of wanting more. Was he her father? Or is it a reincarnation? Good one Pri

  2. Abhijit Ray says:

    Lot of hard work to see an old photograph. Unique take on the prompt.

  3. geekanika says:

    who was trying to gaslight her and why? a longer story someday perhaps? Nice one Priya.

    • Priya says:

      I guess it does require more explanation. Her parents didn’t want her to remember someone. They thought he didn’t deserve her. Thank you, Kanika.

  4. Lavanya says:

    Who was he? How was he connected to her? Why were her memories repressed? Nice mystery you have going there, Priya.

    • Priya says:

      He was someone she loved… but was made to believe he was a figment of her imagination. Finally, she had evidence to prove otherwise. Thank you, Lav

  5. She was getting glimpses of past! Good she dared to dig up and found memories. Now, she would be able to find the face in the pictures too.

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  7. It’s an intriguing story begging to be told further in detail, Priya, especially about that man and his relationship with her.

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