Falling Teardrop…

Eyes
April 4, 2018
Geisha
April 6, 2018

It
is
in
her
black
fragile
nostalgic
vulnerable
eyes. A teardrop
originates, while she
waits for the billet-doux
from her beau. With the
resonance of reminiscence,
residing on pupil, a droplet of
tear  escapes  the lashes, rolls
down her cheeks and kisses her
lips,  flowing, and  falling  into
the rivulet-forming not a real
oasis but a deceptive mirage,
tranquility  lost  some-
where…..only hope
shines softly in
her eyes


Read my previous posts for #BlogchatterA2Z –An Archaic worldCrush, BlueprintDazzled, Eyes

0 Comments

  1. Beautiful shape poem Priya.
    You really did get that teardrop right. Going back up to read it again

  2. Amazing. And to write it as a teardrop is really creative. Loved it.

  3. randommusings29 says:

    I love how you’ve wrote this in the tear drop shape! So creative
    Debbie

  4. Alubhujiablog says:

    That’s so beautiful . Tear form writing is creative

  5. Neha says:

    Beautiful. And such a creative idea to write it in that shape!

  6. sayeridiary says:

    Wow! You are creating magic with words! And the teardrop shape, its so creative..loved it.

  7. mammaspeaks says:

    Priya, that’s a calligram, made popular by French poet guillaume Apollinaire during the first world War. Have studied this. Wow.. Loved it.

  8. Iain Kelly says:

    Lovely words, and I love that they form the shape of a teardrop too. Well done.
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  9. Lavanya says:

    Wow, a teardrop as a calligram. Just loved it. I can’t write poetry for nuts so obviously I am super impressed you did that too as a part of AtoZ Challenge. You go, gurl!

  10. Aesha says:

    I am Supremely impressed by you Priya! My words won’t do justice to your talent. You are so very creative. And until yesterday you didn’t know what you will write about! Wow!

  11. Beautiful, Priya! Quite an inventive mind you have there!

  12. CRD says:

    That was bloody amazing!! I never knew such a genre existed – a shape poem? This probably entailed twice the creativity that a regular poet would require. Kudos to your effort!!!
    All the best for the A to Z Challenge. Do drop by mine,
    Cheers,
    CRD

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  14. Beautiful! (Both the words and it’s shape!)

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  18. Simply amazing! The tear drop shape was the perfect completion!

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  24. Dr Pooja Mishra says:

    Tear shape of poem…..Awesome. ….very creative I am impressed. …keep it up dear

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  36. Kalpana says:

    Wow – not only is the shape amazing, the words are truly poetic. Such a pleasurable read.

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