Falling Teardrop…
Eyes
April 4, 2018Geisha
April 6, 2018It
is
in
her
black
fragile
nostalgic
vulnerable
eyes. A teardrop
originates, while she
waits for the billet-doux
from her beau. With the
resonance of reminiscence,
residing on pupil, a droplet of
tear escapes the lashes, rolls
down her cheeks and kisses her
lips, flowing, and falling into
the rivulet-forming not a real
oasis but a deceptive mirage,
tranquility lost some-
where…..only hope
shines softly in
her eyes
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Beautiful shape poem Priya.
You really did get that teardrop right. Going back up to read it again
Thank u Namratha 😘😘
Amazing. And to write it as a teardrop is really creative. Loved it.
Thanks so much 🙂
I love how you’ve wrote this in the tear drop shape! So creative
Debbie
Thanks Debbie. That’s so kind of you.
That’s so beautiful . Tear form writing is creative
Thanks a lot Monika !
Beautiful. And such a creative idea to write it in that shape!
Thanks so much Neha 🙂
Wow! You are creating magic with words! And the teardrop shape, its so creative..loved it.
thanks so much Sayeri. your words mean a lot to me
Priya, that’s a calligram, made popular by French poet guillaume Apollinaire during the first world War. Have studied this. Wow.. Loved it.
yup, glad you know that. I am a literature student and I love the form. thanks so much
I did one semester in French lit., hence know this. 🙂
Lovely words, and I love that they form the shape of a teardrop too. Well done.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
Wow, a teardrop as a calligram. Just loved it. I can’t write poetry for nuts so obviously I am super impressed you did that too as a part of AtoZ Challenge. You go, gurl!
Thanks so much Lavanya for your kind words. It means a lot to me 🙂
I am Supremely impressed by you Priya! My words won’t do justice to your talent. You are so very creative. And until yesterday you didn’t know what you will write about! Wow!
Thanks so much Aesha! I am grateful for ur kind words. I’m overwhelmed !
Beautiful, Priya! Quite an inventive mind you have there!
Thanks so much Tina 🙂
That was bloody amazing!! I never knew such a genre existed – a shape poem? This probably entailed twice the creativity that a regular poet would require. Kudos to your effort!!!
All the best for the A to Z Challenge. Do drop by mine,
Cheers,
CRD
yeah there is a term for it, calligram. Thanks a lot. I appreciate your comments. do drop in your website, tried looking for it, couldn’t find it.
It’s scriptedinsanity(dot)blogspot(dot)com
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Beautiful! (Both the words and it’s shape!)
Thank you 🙂
Thanks so much
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Simply amazing! The tear drop shape was the perfect completion!
Thanks so much Archana. Means a lot
Thanks so much
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Tear shape of poem…..Awesome. ….very creative I am impressed. …keep it up dear
Thank u
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Wow – not only is the shape amazing, the words are truly poetic. Such a pleasurable read.
Thanks so much, Kalpana. I am so glad you found this poem from the archive and read it. 😊