Her Eyes

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October 2, 2017
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When I met her first
I saw her eyes….
So calm & tender.
Innocence residing on pupil,
and Congeniality on lashes.
Sparkling with a dream
the world could stop on its single wink.
Soothing when they fix on u,
and lovable when they look away,
hard to believe such eyes exist…
I met her yesterday,
and saw those eyes again….
So deep & melancholic.
Now, fear residing on pupil,
and vulnerability on lashes.
Helpless, like a bird without any wings.
Shunning the world with a frequent blink.
Moving away soon as they catch on you,
and pitiable as they look away.
Hard to imagine what made her change that way…
I met her again
and saw the  eyes…
devoid of any residue of pain,
so confident but cautious.
Now, hope residing on pupil,
and tenacity on lashes.
Brightening like sun
now nothing can stop her…
Neither an order nor any whim.
Penetrating as they fix on you,
and mysterious while they look away.
O! Why she had to change anyway…

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  1. We have to change. There must be reason for her to change. She may never open. Beautiful poetry.

  2. It makes you wonder what happened to her for the pain and sadness to occur. Then again, it’s those moments that help us grow and learn. Nicely done!

  3. Aesha says:

    Priya, beautiful poetry!! People change but I am glad at the end there is hope & confidence and nor vulnerability.

  4. Geeta Nair says:

    Swings from happiness to sadness to hope. Positive lines. Loved it.

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