I keep going on (a song)

Banon's Conundrum
March 5, 2018
One More
March 21, 2018

Blurred memories of childhood
as I Walk down the  lane again
Feel the winter in my skin
Without a woolen coat
but with a warm heart
I keep going on…
The colors which now are smudged
Were once so bright and fresh
The fragrance  of the dried rose
my heart hasn’t forgotten yet
so I keep going on…
The taste of the early morning coffee
Still lingers on my taste-bud
The blurred memories which deny to go
They are here forever
I keep going on…
The people’s face so distinct then
Now appear so hazy and blurred
Under a small oak tree
As I feel the memory  again
I keep going on…
Sweet nothings still whisper in ears-
With little less resonance
Craving for the forbidden touch
Until the last words spoken
I keep going on…
they keep going on…


  1. snehal joshi says:

    🙂 New form of blog post but loved it.
    “The people’s face so distinct then
    Now appear so hazy and blurred
    Under a small oak tree
    As I feel the memory again
    I keep going on..”
    Loved this.
    #Instacuppa #Superbloggerchallenge2018

  2. Wow, Priya! This is a beautiful and evocative poem. Loved the mental imagery ….:) Please read my Week 5 post for #Superbloggerchallenge2018 here: https://thetinaedit.com/2018/03/16/lets-talk-blogging-superbloggerchallenge2018/

  3. richamina says:

    amazing poem #superbloggerchallenge2018

  4. zainab says:

    Nice lines, Priya. You are really gifted.

  5. msarora says:

    Lovely poem…#Superbloggerchallenge2018
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  6. Mann says:

    Only thise who have actually lived some beautiful moments with full heart can imagine this. Wonderful.
    Mann 💓

  7. Lovely poem and you had expressed all emotions so beautifully. enjoyed reading it, #Superbloggerchallenge2018

  8. We all do keep going on moving on.. loved the rhythm of your song/poem #SuperBloggerChallenge2018

  9. I love poetry. This is a beautiful poetic explanation of life.
    Loved it.
    Pls read my week5 post for #superbloggerchallenge2018 #instacuppa

  10. […] enemies. Most of them were present on the success party of her debut music album. The song ‘I will keep going on‘ was still playing in the background, on loop. It was eerie to say the least. Nobody had the […]

  11. Leha says:

    This was so melancholic, brought back many memories…
    #MyFriendAlexa #literarylehareads

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