She sees the rainbow in her mother’s eyes,
Bright, colorful and mystical.
The rainbow gets hazy and soon
She can’t see them anymore…
Instead, she hears the pitter-patter
She collects tears and raindrops
And vainly tries to separate the two
In her tiny palm…
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beautiful one priya <3
Thank you, Bahavna.
Touched !
Thanks, Jaya.
Lovely lines, Priya! Whenever a daughter moves away from her mother, this is how she feels – tears in her eyes!
Thanks so much, Anshu. That’s what unconditional love is.
Such a lovely read Priya! It took me two times to understand what you have written. Once I did, I just feel you have brought out the essence of this poetry beautifully.
Thanks, Jayanthi. I am glad you liked it. I love writing poetry. It’s soul satisfying 😊
Sad…no one should ever lose a mom…never!!!
#mannreads
True.. Thanks, Mann.
This is a beautiful poem and captures the relationship that a daughter and a mother share. And then eventually how she loses her mother. *touched*
Thanks so much, Tamanna. I glad you shared your interpretation. 😊